Saturday, May 31, 2014

Beta-Readers: The Odyssey!

Maybe you have a manuscript that you have been sitting on for a long time. Perhaps you’re still working on your alpha (my term for first rough draft). Regardless of the stage of your writing, at SOME point, you will want another pair of eyes to look over your work. Of course, it would be best if the first person is not a publisher, or agent, but that’s for another discussion. The focus for today is on those wonderful people known as Beta-Readers.

Why do you need a Beta-Reader?
As the creator of the work, it is rather hard, and arguably impossible, to remain objective. This can manifest itself in your work in many ways. One possibility is accidently foregoing information that is needed for clarity.  In that instance it makes sense to you, as you keep mentally adding information that’s not actually presented. Another reason is relatability to the characters or story. You may think your characters’ actions make perfect sense; your readers may not agree and find themselves confused and unable to connect to these “unpredictable people.”  Beta-Readers can help catch these, and many other issues, while providing valuable feedback.

How do I find Beta-readers?
The best part of this is you may already know people who would not only be willing, but would rather enjoy getting a sneak peek at your work. However, a word of caution: don’t look for ‘yes men.’ Generally speaking, family members, including dear ole Mom, fall into this category. You need help finding and fixing issues with your story; not getting your ego stroked. That being said, make sure it is someone you trust. Both to give you honest feedback, and that they want stab you in the back and try and take your story. Having a digital paper-trail via emails could help, along with contracts and all that other mess. Talk with your friends and people you know about what you do, you never know when you’ll run into an enthusiast.

How do I select Beta-Readers?
Some authors may not even consider this question; I know I didn’t at first. You may receive a good number of requests to be a beta-reader; don’t simply accept everyone. First take time and factor the pros and cons of each and every person. It really helps to know what the person is like. If they are extremely anal about certain things, take that into consideration. You may not know that from your very first piece you have others read, but you’ll quickly learn who has pet peeves that will conflict with your work. Problems can arise from simple name choice, to even stylistic disagreement. Keep this in mind, and plan according to their strength and weaknesses. Making and keeping a file with all the information you find out about your readers can help you in the future. Certain ones might not be good for your current project, but they may be excellent for others.

How do I use a Beta-Reader?
The exact benefit you gain from Beta-Readers has a lot to do with your personal wishes. They can provide a lot of feedback on style, flow, plot, and errors in grammar and word choice. They also have the tremendous ability to let you know if your personal vision of the story is getting across as intended. But, remember one key factor when perusing all of this wonderful feedback: it’s YOUR book. Yes their feedback should be considered and evaluated on its own merit, but keep in mind that it should all be taken as “a suggestion.” Their ‘fixes’ may be changing your stylistic choices, in which case nothing needs to be ‘fixed.’ It is up to you to decide to make any changes or fix the issues they bring up.

Beta-Readers are awesome!
They are hard to find, and they should all be cherished. Remember that they are taking THEIR time to help you make your work the best it can be. So don’t forget to thank them appropriately!


--Kirk

Tuesday, May 13, 2014

Camp NaNo: A love/ hate relationship

It's definitely been a while since I posted. I have been SERIOUSLY preoccupied... with life. BUT this delay in posting has given me an idea to talk about, instead of the several others I have waiting on a pad.

Camp NaNo is sort of NaNaoWriMo's little cousin that takes place over the month of April. Instead of a solid 50k word count goal, you are given the opportunity to make your OWN goal for the month. Some people make it more conservative than others. Personally I went for another 50k goal. Others went for a more modest word count. I believe there was an individual that wanted to simply get 4k for the month.

Of these, not everyone succeeded in their goals. At least not officially. I'm not going to belittle anyone for making their goals any size, and I'm not scolding people for not meeting the goals they set. What I WILL talk about, is budgeting. Specifically budgeting your time for these sorts of events / contests.

There is a big misconception on the rate to which a person can type. Typing speed world record for alphanumeric keyboard is 216. Yes, that IS impressive. But the average person is going to type far slower than that. One study done in 1998(old I know but still relevant-ish) said the average typing speed was 33 per minute, or 19 for composition. When transcribing you will always type faster than if you were having to come up with it as you go. Add in the complexity that can come with trying to keep plots straight, how characters would react to certain stimuli, all while trying not to over use certain words... and your ACTUAL average speed will drop tremendously.

When it comes to setting goals, you need to factor this in with your calculations. If you block out a large portion of time for other things, and set a high goal, you're not likely to reach said goal if enough time isn't allotted for the actual writing. Make your goals a struggle, but manageable. Setting yourself up for failure is simply "setting yourself up for failure." There is no tragic marter in this sort of thing. You simply didn't do it.

In some cases you may let others down, such as regular readers, when you don't post when you say you will. For something like NaNo, you've missed a golden opportunity. Why is this such a waste? This could have been a major morale boost for you.  Most likely you'll feel a pang of regret, or self-loathing or any of those other "kicking self in pants" descriptors. Never underestimate the power of morale. Instead of being elated, or at the very least satisfied in a job well done, you may start questioning yourself. In other cases you may start actively AVOIDING similar tasks / opportunities because you've failed at it already. I've seen it happen many times, and I find it personally disheartening when talented people cut themselves off at the knee.

So... BUDGET YOUR TIME WISELY. Make goals that are actually attainable. Pushing yourself and making it challenging is fine, but make it reasonable. Don't do things simply trying to impress other people. After all: no one will be able to read your masterpiece, if you never finish.


--Kirk